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The Pen Master ©

There is a fine balance between expression and control. Poetry in an excellent way to find that balance. Mastered meter and possibly rhyme, to avant-garde free verse is bent and willed as the poet's great message finds freedom on the page. My goal, to find this balance... Everything on this blog is copyright © by P. Allan Frederick and permission must be granted in order to copy or use any content!

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I am a passionate and compassionate Biblican who is also deeply into the arts. I can defend doctrines and bring people to God, but I also am a fine art painter and creator and have published poetry in several magazines including Pegasus, Envoi, and a hand full of times in the local paper. I also have a POD Poetry Book which can be bought on Amazon.com called "September Blue" by P. Allan Frederick.

Tuesday, June 06, 2006

June 6, 2006

Today has informally been called “Apocalypse Day” because of the date – 06/06/06. Or – 666 – the sign of the beast! Well, on this day, I’ve chosen to share some Haiku of classic Japanese Haiku writer, Basho. Haiku is a classic form of poetry that consists of a three line singular stanza, with the first and third lines consisting of five syllables and the second line having seven syllables. The subject matter is commonly something to do with nature or romance, and it is in present tense; which means that the poem is taking place as you read it. Now, keep in mind that Basho’s poetry in English doesn’t follow the syllable rule because it is translated, and the translator can only do his/her best. I’m going to include three:


Sparrows in eaves,
mice in ceiling –
celestial music.


Ebb tide –
willows
dip to mud.


Nothing more lonely –
heart-shaped
paulownia leaf


Notice the stark simplicity of these poems, yet, they each tell a full on story. It is amazing how effective words can be when harnessed with bit and bridal. What intensity of taking words and not letting them lead you. Make making them submit to your own personal literary courage as you force their grace on the page.

Words can be used for good and evil, like all things; technology, energy, money, etc. Without a fantastic vocabulary, one must face a greater challenge of using limited resources, but those of extended vocabularies must make sure that their arsenal isn’t permitted to reign free.

In that same vein, I envy those who have the usage of two or more languages. I suppose, if properly applied, expression could be limitless. I consistently have difficulty finding the right word for a situation in both my poetry and prose. But the bright side is that as I strive to embrace the new life given to me, I eagerly search and find what ever questions I might have.

Well, I don’t really read into the fact that today is “Apocalypse Day”, because that is just Neo-Christian jib-a-jab. But, I am grateful that I have been given another day to celebrate life!

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